My favorite game is Super Mario Bros; however, this game was put on sale before I was born. Princess Peach was swoop away King Bowser Koopa; therefore, Mario and Luigi go to a castle where is King Bowser Koopa. However, they can't easily go to there because enemies led by Bowser interfere them; therefore, they have to defeat enemies. This game is very interesting for me; moreover, this is the best-selling game in the world. I like both video game and board game; however, I don't often play a game. I don't really like play a game alone; however, I like play a game with many people because when I'm playing a game with my friends, I am interesting than playing a game alone. Therefore I like play a game with my friends.
I remember spending lots of hours playing Super Mario when I was younger...it was really exciting to finally defeat Bowser! I heard there's a Super Mario 3D game now - I think this game will be popular for a long time.
ReplyDeleteGood use of transition words!
Corrections:
I like both video games and board games; however, I don't often play games. (It's better to use plural nouns for general statements)
Therefore, I like playing games with my friends.